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Blue Outline by obiwan [Reviews - 1]

Subject: WWW Form Submission
Date: Fri, 16 Feb 2007 11:21:28 -0800 (PST)
To: obiwan@ghosts.org
Name: Saffi
Email: pinkladyapplez@yahoo.com
Location: North Carolina

I have two short stories to tell so please keep reading.

Okay, this story has happened recently and I swear it's true, even though people don't believe me.

One night I was lying in my bed and having trouble falling asleep. It was around 11:00pm, which is wierd because since I have to get up early in the morning I usually fall asleep by 10:30. My bed faces my door, so when I lay on it I can see the hallway and the bathroom, and sometimes my parents room if I'm in the right posistion.

Anyway, I just decided to stare into the hallway and maybe look for my kittens until I fell asleep. Suddenly a blue line, maybe as thick as a pencil, started forming a shape that was around the hieght of someone between my mom and dad's hieghts. I could make the outline of a head, shoulders, and a dress? on the figure. I couldn't see anything that was ON the figure because it was just the line, and the where the face, clothes, etc. should have been was the hall.

That was it, just a blue outline standing in my door, no filling, just an outline of a person. When I opened my mouth to say something or scream for help, it vanished. Just like that.

I couldn't sleep that night. I hid my head under the covers, that's how frightened I was. The next morning I wasn't even tired. Even though I didn't sleep any that night I wasn't even tired in school.

*******

I don't know if this story was just my imagination, but I highly doubt it. Just a few nights ago I was laying in my bed, facing the wall. All of a sudden I felt heavy breathing on my back, even though I couldn't hear anything. You know how you get that wierd feeling on your back when you think someone's watching you? That's how I felt. The creepiest part was that I could feel a person standing behind me, but I wasn't even looking in that direction and no one was touching me.

The End.

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